It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It has been a widespread idea that punishment could have benefit to remote children's view about right and wrong. That momentary idea could not be judged true at all due to right and wrong are an abstract entity and despite consists of relative value.
In the early development of infants, the logic capabilities come firstly then follow by linguistics complementary. In some sort of discussion, babies may not pronounce sound correctly and arrange grammatical syntaxes, however, they definitely understand on what sort of their mother's instructions. They will keep in their mind about a warning gesture, for instance, infant children may curious about the flame across the dark room, they will catch up the strange phenomena and want to touch that bright dangerous red light, then they hear and watch the high-stress tone and the gesture movement from their mommies' hand. In so forth, their logic confirms that is warning sign that could be harmful things will happen. In that way, in early development human consist of strong full software that is called by logic.
That proof may lead us an understanding that through logic human could choose right decision even tough in early development, infant children may not define what is right.
In my opinion, a punishment may take role in order to inhibit a kid to not repeat a wrong action in a second time. It is not logically accepted that locking the trouble children in a room in order to give them a lesson. The right lesson can be received with taking a responsibility for what they did, and locking room only serves an ego from their parent's emotion.
Above all, children may learn right and wrong trough their logical inclination and the physical punishment only reveal the truth about the leak of good education. Ordering the children to taking a responsibility is an excellent punishment to shape responsible man.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...g that through logic human could choose right decision even tough in early developmen...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...emotion. Above all, children may learn right and wrong trough their logical inclinat...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt punishment to shape responsible man.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, so, then, for instance, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99680511182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68150297523 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6587765897 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206125635148 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756160374404 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453725222503 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126525448694 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401962600439 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.