It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviors to children
It is argued that children acknowledge the distinction between right and wrong at their initial years of life is crucial and that it is sensible to apply penalties to assist them to get the picture. I totally agree with this statement because punishment makes them memorize the lesson better as well as help correct their behaviors to the right.
Suitable penalties will help kids remember situations better because they are impressed by the consequence of the wrong thing they have done and what they have to do to correct their mistakes. That will remind them of right and wrong in future which is really vital for a human-being. Recent research showed that kids are eligible to memorize things for years, even their whole lives if they have their own experience. And advisable corrections can help alter young people’s acts to the right when doing bad has not become a habit yet, it is much easier to fix that. Children are like clean papers, so they should be taught about good and bad, pros and cons as early as possible and know about ramifications could happen for what they have done. That is why it is a good way to support them to become complete adults in the long run. Personally, violence is not an excellent idea, but parents and teachers can use a smarter way to treat kids, such as: prohibiting them from doing what they like if they do bad, give them penalties with doing chores or cleaning classrooms, etc.
To conclude, children should acknowledge at their early age about right and wrong, and it is practical to give them penalties to support them gain the lesson.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73381294964 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46921944477 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5143933278 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261619736933 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103948633769 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637311524742 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195143268 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318797356978 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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