It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?
It is undeniable that pupils tend not to choose science subjects for their further studying. This essay will point out both the driving force behind this trend and its influence on people.
There are several reasonable matters that lead to this deficiency. Firstly, sci-fi subjects are known as extremely difficult ones. As college science students, they have to try so hard to understand the lessons and handle a heavy study load. Secondly, the risk of being unemployed as a science graduate is pretty high, so much higher than other majors. as there are fewer opportunities in the job market. Owing to those reasons, students are about to choose subjects that will not put them under pressure but still create a golden chance for them to have a nice job.
As a result of this phenomenon, our society will have to cope with the following hurdles. The fewer students choose science subjects in college, the fewer workers the science industry will have. Notably, the lack of new inventions in the future will be clearly seen and the technical development will be downgraded. If this problem keeps being severe, those countries who have this issue will not have a chance to modernize.
In a nutshell, to reduce this trouble, every single nation has to point out the measures as soon as possible as the effects of it are pretty negative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
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Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...high, so much higher than other majors. as there are fewer opportunities in the jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90350877193 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48884862892 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3938642204 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239663600895 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769975621714 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588980970388 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125866982058 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708165161245 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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