It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree".

Essay topics:

It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree".

There are numerous disadvantages to getting married while still a student. “[Getting married in college] can create a greater problem when you are dependent on parents to support you. There is the probability of more tension on the part of both sets of parents.” Expecting your parents to continue paying your tuition as though you were still a child once you have chosen to take on the very adult responsibility of marriage can also create tension.

Another reason to wait is the time constraint on enrolled newlyweds. Balancing time at home, adjusting to a new life and spending time on academics is a daunting task, regardless of how organized you are. Married college students are often left with not enough time to do housework, study or have couple time. Little time is left for each other so there’s less time to work on personal growth and the marriage.

The college marriage often results in restriction of college experiences, participation in college functions and of
relationships of college friends.

Not only that, but she also finds that marriage affects academics. “There is often a drop in grades due to added responsibilities or having to take on a full time job. The distractions that marriage brings are endless and normal, but if your current schedule and goals make marriage too much to handle on top of your college life, then the smartest decision may be taking care of your college career before saying your vows.

Sometimes the engaged couple isn’t actually ready to decide what they want out of life (or marriage) yet. College is a time of growth and maturing. Getting married too soon can cut growth and maturation short. “Most students need some time to be self-supporting, living on your own and making decisions as you mature. An early marriage can prevent students from ever getting that time to mature.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ty of marriage can also create tension. Another reason to wait is the time const...
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...articipation in college functions and of relationships of college friends. No...
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...responsibilities or having to take on a full time job. The distractions that marriage bri...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258426966292 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.165730337079 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0758426966292 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.061797752809 0.0501214627716 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0421348314607 0.0437548338989 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112359550562 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0533707865169 0.0403226058552 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87592902241 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393258426966 0.0326793684256 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.061797752809 0.0861772015684 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140449438202 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112359550562 0.011925033212 94% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06129032258 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367741935484 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287096774194 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183870967742 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106451612903 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87592902241 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 62.7464207579 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.375 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2294142669 49.517814964 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4375 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 48.0846774194 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.57291666667 1.69124875643 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241955241919 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106851240125 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070770992048 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57619147859 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.208376988998 0.148594505496 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101568439151 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475621888232 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220317004556 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0929746129114 0.0638462369009 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127176490121 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070656654132 0.058150111329 122% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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