As languages such as English, Spinish and Mandarin become more widely spoken , there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.
What is your view of this practice?
It is undeniable that the world becomes more development and intedrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing. Inevitably, speakers of minority languages have been under pressure to speak the languages of more dominant group. Some people think that many minority languages may disappear and government should be have methods to protecting it. In this essay, I would suggest some measures to stop this process.
It is true that as the balance of power among groups of people throughout history, languages have arisen, changeg and then die out. Even one widely-spoken languages such as Latin have disappeared. To some extent, I think this process may be inevitable. However, there are examples of communities that have managed to preserve and even revive languages under threat. For instance, Irish and Scots Gaclic have been preserved by government policy on education and broadcast media.
On the other hand, there are several benefits of culture are maintained such as songs, literature and local traditions. These all contribute to the richness and variety of human culture. Moreover, language help communities to remain conhesive and to have a strong sense of identify. This can help people to be strong in adversity. Where this sense of idemtify and cohesion has been lost. For example, many indigenous communities can get some problem such as low self-esteem, lack of confidence and loss of initiative.
In conclusion, it is possible to make the effort to preserve minority languages. This can have benefits both for the minority speech community and for society in terms of cultural richness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84349147827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6712086514 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8235294118 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341543454446 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100369383423 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717465700644 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200863829793 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884420668164 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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