Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Over the last few years, the rate of juvenile crime has escalated dramatically in many cities across the globe. This is, possibly, the most serious issue for parents, teachers and governments to contend with. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.
One of the primary causes of the problem is the absence of discipline in the home. Nowadays, most families have two working parents, so, their children are undoubtedly left at home with technological devices, and given very little guidance on how to distinguish between good things and bad things. Moreover, because parents feel guity about not spending enough time with them, they are often lenient with what their children want to do, even bad behaviours. As a result, a lot of children are lured into social evils such as drugs and alcohol abuse, prostitute, pickpocket, mugging, even enrolling in terrorist organizations. A way of solving this would be for parents to pay more attention to educate adolescents, which will help giving them right eyes on the world around and how to stay away from crime.
Another factor is the discrimination at school. In America, for example, the discrimination has been a common thing in every class, which has bad affects on mental health of students: depression, communication problem, negative thoughts. Consequently, many children find delinquencies including violent crimes a great way to release stress and catch attention from other people. One way to solve this issue is for teachers to show students the dangerous of bad treatment and the important of cooperation and union, as well as for parents to understand the cause of their bad behaviour, express love and support to their children. These may help adolescents to overcome difficulties at school, in this way they will be able to have positive attitude towards society.
A third cause of the problem is the impact of violent media on teenagers. Instead of playing outdoor, teens tend to sit in front of television or computer with thousands of games and films, and unfortunately, violence is one of the most popular form of entertainment. Games and films promote teens to imititate in order to fulfill risky, adventurous, odd feelings,.. The movie called “The Matrix”, for example, was said to be the triggering factor to the violent high school students that wore trench coats. This kind of entertainment also prevent young adults the ability to distinguish between what is reality and what is not, and children become more familiar with how to act out violence without consequences. As a result, teens are more likely to perform violent activities but not knowing that what they are doing is wrong or inappropriate. The way forward could be to encourage young adults to participate in activities outside as well as lessen the time they exposure to games and films.
To sum up, juvenile crime has become a very serious issue in many countries, and this is due, by and large, to a lack of discipline in the home, discrimination and violent media. Failure to tackle this problem now will lead to its escalating out of control. I am of the view that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with parents and teachers
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to give' or 'give'.
Suggestion: to give; give
...to educate adolescents, which will help giving them right eyes on the world around and...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...fulfill risky, adventurous, odd feelings,.. The movie called 'The Matrix&apos...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ulfill risky, adventurous, odd feelings,.. The movie called 'The Matrix'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, third, well, as for, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2701.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 535.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04859813084 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86317681355 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538317757009 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 826.2 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1227647837 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.434782609 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186008384798 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495118905932 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607550428798 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117111296007 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781578399842 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.