A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?
Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.
The life-style, education and learning have changed dramatically since introduction of computer, mobile devices and many more other gadgets. The search for information has become so easier, fun and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Moreover the immense advances of science and technology in electronics home appliances have raised the living standard of a common man. It is undeniable that the technology has both advantages and disadvantages which must be address accordingly.
To begin with, Globalization is the most common used term in the twenty first century. The inventions of science and technology have integrated the world economically, politically and culturally. The distances of thousands of miles between countries can be travel in hours due to celerity of planes; it’s all because of the jet engines which has increased the speed of aero planes in the last century.
Moreover, the invention of home appliances which involves air conditioner, heaters , electric geyser, microwave ovens, many other electronics has made the life so easier, amusing and fun which was not possible before nineteenth century. Today we can’t imagine our life without invention.
However the things which were created by human being has its immense advantages but also comes with disadvantages. First of all, if take example of mobile phone which has concept of communication but also being used in criminal activities like black mailing, extortion and also being used as a detonator in a bomb blast. Secondly the nuclear reactor or bombs can be used to produce electricity, but could have a devastating consequences, if use against humanity.
In my personal perspective, I would like to reiterate that the advantages of technology outrage the disadvantages. It’s a responsibility of all governments to give its citizen a peaceful environment to live. Science has done a great job for the betterment of humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ty has expedited the data availability. Moreover the immense advances of science and tec...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... which involves air conditioner, heaters , electric geyser, microwave ovens, many ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... imagine our life without invention. However the things which were created by human ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51505016722 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17899180384 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9855753021 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124473129673 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459169044009 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448250962886 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708691293413 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054918573143 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.