A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
Today tourism industry is progressing rapidly, consequently providing source of employements to the people. However, it is argued that tourism can bring certain adversities if not managed properly. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the positive and negative effects of tourism in the contemporary world.
To commence with, there are numerous merits of tourism. Firstly, along with employement opportunites , it also boosts the economy of the country. Millions of tourists visit different places and during that time, they stay in hotels, use eateries and buy gifts for their near and dears , absolutely provide chances to local business to thrive.Secondly, tourism broadens the horizons of the travellers.There are several adventures places and amazing things to see in certain countries, which initate the creative thinking among masses , at the same time soothens their souls. In addition to this, digitalization enableing everybody to have a glanceof locations virtually, ultimately which arise intense curosity among holidaymakers to visit tourist hotspots. Therefore, tourism is advantageous for an individual, nation as well as for tourists.
In contrast, there are few downsides of tourism. On the one hand,it alters the beauty of holiday destinations. Because of the increase in frequency of visitors, the places have started looseing their attraction. For example- a study by Hindustan times shows that many ideal tourist locations especially mountains and hilly areas have become the dumping grounds. People donot pay attention to keep places clean, however,l they through litter such as food packets, plastic bottles etcetera. On the other hand, certain cities are abundantly dependant on tourism, so in certain circumstances like coronavirus outbreak, they are adversely affected in terms of income generation .
To conclude, undoubtedly, tourism industry have several pros as like progression of economy and enhancement of knowledgeof the individuals ,but also it diminish the natural essence of attractive places and also, affect certain nations economy during shortage of vistors. Hence, I believe the advantages of tourism certainally outweigh its cons in certain aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76923076923 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05680794229 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655384615385 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0126839469 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9375 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238169474187 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802078170421 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579138844669 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153830472373 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692547672023 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.