A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
These days some people assert that tourism generates a significant amount of income for many countries. On the other hand, others are of the opinion that tourism could lead to a negative impact on the historical places. From my perspective, I agree, to some extent that tourism brings benefits to country, but also have certain drawbacks which must be addressed accordingly.
To begin with, it is quite apparent to say that tourism have myriad of advantages. It can support the country economy and also help local people to earn money. One illustration of this is that the tourist spends money on number of service, like travelling, amusement, hotel and medicines, in this way tourism is responsible for influx of cash in a country. Another advantage seems to be that the local people lives near places of interest can earn handsome amount of money by working as a local guiders and providing tourist with basic facilities.
To put the issue into perspective, another most important point which is worth considering is that the image of developing countries, could improve when people from outside the world interact with local people. An example that can be put forward is that the country like Brazil which live in civil war, have high rate of poverty, disease, unemployment, corrupt administration lead to immense embracement. But this image could be improved by positive exhibition of their friendly culture and lifestyle of people.
Despite the above argument, yet there is negative side of the picture, which advocates the tourism could exploit the natural resources, monument, temples, and other places of interest. Increasing in the number of could destroy the originality of historical places. Furthermore, we should not lose sight of this fact that presence of tourist also attracts thief and smugglers. This could be the burden on government to take some measures in order to cater such situation.
To recapitulate, It is indeed a debatable issue which needs further analysis and discussion. However, in the light of above discussed arguments and examples, it would be quite safe to conclude that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Suggestion:
...dvantages outweigh the disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24712643678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80205863019 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3733153333 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168462640747 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520095982063 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314798404686 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886842188538 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372236983506 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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