Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions . DO you agree or disagree ?
The development of technology is becoming more and more prominent nowadays , there is some arguments that approaching technology to collect information is more convient than going to public libraries and it is insignificant for preserving the libraries . In my perspective , I completely disagree with this opinion .
On the one hand , there are some understandable reasons why students accessing Internet devices would be more benefitcial than the traditional ways like collecting information in reading books in the libraries . Firstly , Wi-fi connection system appears every where so they could search a lot of news and information wherever or whenever they want such as in the airport , at class , convient stores or even at home . Secondly , there are many sources which can give to the unviersity students many choices for their homework , when they have the presentations or lectures at class ,those includes complicated topics that they have ever met in their major then they could finish their quickly. Finally , through improvement in modern devices also open the window to help the other teengers have a new chance to study in group when some of them live in outskirts of city while the others stay at city .
On the other hand , I always belive that libraries stay a crucial role in education system not only in Vietnam but also in the international countries . The main reason is that libraries create a perfect studying atmosphere with providing of sufficient infrastructures as well as facilities , such as available tables, chairs , lighting organization and even fans or air-conditioner , to manufacture a places as comfortable as possible for students furthermore when higher education students come to libraries they have to obey the strict rules in there they ought keep quiet to maintain a tranquil place. As a result with a studying asmotsphere is surrounding with enough standard and high cognitive students , libraries could enhance the concentration of the other students to help them have a excellent results in their study progress. The other reason is that reading books in libraries is extremely repliable because before publicing those books in universities , they have been verified by school and even government therefore their content is really relevant with pupil’s major .Furthermore when university students apply those reliable knowlegde in their deadlines ,these homeworks or excercises would be more specific and clearer and then they would received trust from their teachers .
In conlusion , although technology has a giant development in the ways student acquire knowledge nowadays but I still believe that libraries help student upgrade their academic studying progress through learning in an optimal atmosphere and providing to them with repliable sources
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45138888889 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02393622869 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539351851852 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.504104608 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.090909091 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.2727272727 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5454545455 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.01903807615 1016% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127177237923 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514269927655 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350563501961 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890313808282 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032084458552 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.