The major cities in the world are growing fast as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cites are facing with? Give solutions to their problems.
It is true to say that most of our urban areas in the world now are growing fast. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences to the young living in there, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Cities growing fast could put a lot of urban young people under pressures of jobs and houses. First of all, labour market in big cities is highly competitive, while the youngsters are still lack of soft skills and experiences. This would lead them to unemployment or low – paid jobs, which does not allow them to make ends meet in metropolitan. Moreover, more and more rural citizens are attracted by the shining vision of luxurious life in major cities, causing the price of house raising dramatically. Even though a young person work with vengeance, he still can not afford to buy a small house on his own.
There are several actions that government should take to deal with some drawbacks of this fast development. Firstly, some industrial region, big companies and co operations must be moved to the rural area to create job opportunities for people living in the countryside. Thanks to this equal distribution, the pressure of jobs in big cities can be reduced. Secondly, in the short – term, government should build some low – price blocks. However, this is just a short – term plan, gorvenment., the most efficient way is accelerating the living standard. Only if there were no distance between rural and urban area, could the King Ta.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89925373134 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67233741882 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2590394338 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16173187806 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529844045543 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046983448039 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917115298903 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483636734497 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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