Everyone is familiar with the saying "prevention is rather than cure". It's absolutely right with regards to childhood diseases. Nowadays there are plenty of vaccinations are available for new born babies to protect them from deadly diseases. Some people say that these immunization process should be made mandatory by law, while others say that it's up to each parents. I agree with the formar because of the following reasons.
Vaccination has lot of benefits, first and foremost it will reduce the child mortality rate to a great extent. Majority of the child death are happening around the world due to the preventable diseases like polio and measles. if the new born is properly vaccinated this would have bee avoided easily. For instance, during 1980's in Africa there were lot of child demises due the infectious fever measles. By witnessing this catastrophe WHO and UN started giving free vaccinations to the toddlers around the continent. The result was astonishing, within the 5 yers of their vaccination process the child mortality rate declined to two third as compared to the pre-vaccination era.
Furthermore, if the authorities will be able to prevent these kind of diseases at the earliest stages of a child, it would be a financial benefit to the government. If there is an outbreak of infections disease like yellow fever, it is the regime's responsibility to take care of it. This would be a great financial burden for the government. So it is better to eradicate the chances before it arises. Moreover, a country's future is in the hands of young generations, if a country has good healthy child population, that shows the country's development in both economical and medical field.
On the flip side of the coin, there are some advantages as well, some times in rare occasions these vaccinations result in some other conditions in toddlers, may be because of the side effects of this medication. In addition, in a democratic set up no government can force it's citizens to take their child to vaccination. It will become a violation of personal freedom.
To recapitulate, because of the reasons stated above, I strongly believe that vaccinations should be made mandatory by law to secure the future of the country and it's citizens. So I believe that the negative effects of vaccinations makes only less importance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07493540052 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99377619153 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547803617571 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1308894009 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5238095238 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162086164737 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426634093752 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438813872915 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860382966896 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232926569987 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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