In many countries, people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Around the globe, many children suffer from obesity and this issue brings many worries for society. There are many causes that contribute to this matter. Also, many people can take some steps to resolve this problem.
On the one hand, the way children eat junk food cause obesity. This is basically for this reason, nowadays toddlers consume an immense amount of fast food and due to the fact that not only does these cluster of food contains a considerable amount of calories, cholesterol and fat, but also lack of vitamins and useful minerals in this group of food exerts grave effects on children. When these sources of fat were consumed by the body, the body cannot accept indisputably these amounts of unhealthy ingredients. Therefore, besides many detrimental side effects, children become plump.
On the other hand, parents can play a vital role to address this problem. These individuals, who are sympathetic and have a genuine love for their children, can inform their children how junk food can impact negatively on their body and in turn cause obesity. Although these explanations may lead to many quarrelsome, they can find some more convenient ways. For instance, it suffices to introduce a brilliant book, which is written by a gifted writer to their children. Hence, if children are aware of how obesity can be dangerous, they will encourage eat more nourishing meals. Thereby, the number of children, who are overweight, will follow a downward trend. So, never children comprehend the ways that obesity can affect their life, provided that someone such as their parents tell them.
In conclusion, junk food is one of the most popular and scrumptious food in all nations. Despite this, overeating of these foods causes obesity in children in addition to many other factors. Moreover, to tackle this problem, parents can put all their effort to tell children of unhealthy ingredients which are used in these foods.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10062893082 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56548273687 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8911900378 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4117647059 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208961487117 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831375475785 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507902636445 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14313136987 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049175585286 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.