Globally, scores of varied nations invest in art. Some people say spending in art is vital whereas, others argue money should be utilized for improvising health and education . I firmly believe in later view, that money should be spend on priorities and then on the paintings and drawings.
Health is necessary to be taken care of as if, no manpower will be left over on earth there will be no one to consider artistic attractions. For instance, someone well said it is body that you need longer than art pieces. There are lots of fatal diseases such as, Aids and various types of Cancer on which scientists is working day and night. As a result, millions are to spent on there research and tons of money on curing the needy ones. Therefore, art can act as a hobby or lesiure activity that can be put on to secondary position but human health cannot be neglected. Furthermore, art should be considered but that cannot happen on the cost of health.
Education is vital, right of every citizen for example, APJ Abdul Kalam once said, there is nothing wrong if you are born poor but, if you die poor there is a problem. That's why, education must be provided to proverty driven ora's of society by the government at no funds so that, there standard of living can be improvised and can be better citizens for the society to reduce crime rate and spread awareness it is imptus. Also, people of slum areas have nothing to do with well furnished big buildings and big dreamy art carfts when, they cannot dream big because they don't have means to do it. It is important for government to utilize their main concern on health and education and left budget on art because it is traditional aspect of people's life and should not be left out. Citizens also have a role to play as it obligatory for them to pay taxes on time so that art can be considered by government having means to do it because afterall its taxes that runs a country.
To conclude, i retirate my opinion first eyes should be on vital needs and wants that is, education and health then on art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52956989247 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40038474396 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2365073096 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155636688929 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672794752602 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614598078048 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123565508446 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896155111988 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.