In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, information plays an essential role in our daily life. Many people get information from traditional media, such as reading newspapers, watching TV, listening to radio. It should be said that, today online media, especially social media is much more broaden in our lives, especially among young generation. Traditional media is getting weaker amongst audience. So, what are the causes of that? Why young people avoid to get news from TV and newspapers? Let`s take a look on this issue.
First of all, the reason might be speed. Young generation is more impatient than older one. Young audience want to get information much rapidly and to read newspapers can be just wasting of time to them.
On the other hand, today, smartphones have a huge impact on people. From this point of view, people can get information from online tools everywhere by their smartphones: metro, bus, on the roads, schools and so forth.
As it mentioned before, social media is almost an evitable part of our daily lives. Consumers can get information from social media easily. Twitter especially has a great role from this point of view.
Secondly, traditional media doesn`t have much more options than new media. For example, you don`t have so many options, you need to follow the news which is shown on TV, it doesn`t matter, this news is interesting for you or not. However, online media can suggests you many options which it gives you an opportunity to choose the one you wanted to know.
Overall, today, reading newspapers and watching TV is getting out-to-date activity for people. The more technology develops, the more traditional media will be no longer to be in use. Even young people are being too lazy for eating, and they prefer to eat on computers, what can we anticipate from them?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid getting'.
Suggestion: avoid getting
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Line 6, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00332225914 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66559904383 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6556783683 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261554523913 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076219258522 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828783387016 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12272952583 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721077296402 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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