In many developing countries, there is a problem with a declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
Air and water are polluted in many advanced countries due to manufacturing and building. On the one hand, it provides employment opportunities and wealth generation, on the other hand it causes environmental deterioration. In this essay I will suggest some possible solutions to avoid them.
Firstly, no one can deny that industry sector has a great impact on environment. Because of producing large amounts of smoke and wastes, it is better to use filters in factory pipes which collects toxic substances. So, these filters may stop causing air pollution by trying to filter the exhaust. Meanwhile, treatment of wastes and disposals of pollutants according to environmental regulations can be very effective for reducing pollution.
Secondly, construction has a negative effect, too. The materials selected for building also influence environment. In this case, choosing appropriate combination of materials which is environmentally preffered can decrease overall effect. Moreover, controlling water runoff from building sites have significant importance.
To conclude, because of air and water are our main resources for living, each of us must protect and preserve the environment, and I hope that governments and other authorities will take into consideration more seriously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268518518519 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.157407407407 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787037037037 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037037037037 0.0437548338989 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106481481481 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0509259259259 0.0403226058552 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.28183309176 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0648148148148 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0324074074074 0.021408717616 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1287.0 1933.35771543 67% => OK
No of words: 191.0 316.048096192 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.73821989529 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20517956788 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429319371728 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.38219895288 0.28420135186 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.30890052356 0.203846283523 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.225130890052 0.137316102897 164% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28183309176 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712041884817 0.56093040696 127% => OK
Word variations: 83.8262467856 60.7387585426 138% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9166666667 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0708241009 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 54.1365619546 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.7037037037 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308756802843 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0286634332983 0.102741220458 28% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0338076360842 0.0668466124924 51% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496453006408 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182111467304 0.148594505496 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103822196327 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859904107762 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.121820545576 0.324371583561 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0478335639729 0.0638462369009 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182002341788 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446488885729 0.058150111329 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.