Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, more and more countries set the most important goal for their countries are the development of economic. In contrast, others believe there are different sectors also play the same important role for a country. In my opinion, although the rise of economic is exceedingly important, other elements are similarly weighty.
It is clear that economic growth acts a vital role in making a nation become better. The economy goes up which means per capita income increases, leading to a higher living standard. The superpowers all have the powerful economies that can make a lot of money which support to the country as a whole. For example, Taiwan had a significantly low average income before 1980; however, the economy had been rising 10% annually in average in more than 20 years. Eventually, the nation creatives better infrastructure, public transportation, health care for their citizens.
Besides the development of one’s nation economy, some other aspects also need to be treated as important as economic rising. Poverty should also be one of the most concerning problems for central government. If an institution of a country can only benefits the specific classes then it is not an effective and fair government. The distance of the wealth and the poor in a society should also be consequently concerned because they both the rich and the poor represent a country. Human economic activities usually harm the environment which would not be preserved for our next generations if we do not have specific act to protect. For example, China’s economy have been increasing dramatically in the last decades but the air polluted in their big cities are under pressure and it leads to many diseases to human
To sum up, it is truly right that economic growth is extremely important for a country. However, other problems such as poverty, the gap between the rich and the poor, as well as environment protection should equivalently be taken care.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, similarly, so, then, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12732919255 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87457046472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574534161491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4740951898 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197470945801 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630479783319 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508741847567 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130775890434 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613153512276 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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