Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Government in all countries have some visions and responsibilities. They are always doing something new to give prosperous future. Many government have to focus only on economic development whereas, in my opinion, economic development of nation is an important goal but this is not the paramount goal.
To begin, plenty of developed countries have achieved their economic destination but they are suffering from hostile relationship with other nations, epidemic disease, corruption, terrorism, crime rate and internal chaos. Thus, these type of countries gives economic satisfaction but they cannot ensure safety and better life style of native. As a result, government is unstable and this situation is intricately linked with education which is the most important for holistic development of the whole country.
Moreover, industrialisation and success in trade ensure government stability in western sovereign states but ultimately they cannot amend environment is inextricably joint with health of citizen. For instance, six month ago, environment of Delhi, capital of India, was escalated by perilous particles such as CO2, CO and many more. Hence, epidemic disease, specially related to lung, have been augmented.
Furthermore, crime rate is also major problem in developed realm especially for other countries' passport holder. Recently, from news report, crime rates of The USA and Australia were on the peak. Additionally, this situation tends to hostile relation between countries. As a result, many time in history wars had been occur and indirectly effect on national economy. What is more, Terrorism and corruption are flourished owing to unbalanced development of different aspect of nation.
To conclude, commercial development is cornerstone of countries but other flank is also essential for giving better satisfaction to native inhabitant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun government seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many governments'.
Suggestion: Many governments
...omething new to give prosperous future. Many government have to focus only on economic developm...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nal chaos. Thus, these type of countries gives economic satisfaction but they can...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...th health of citizen. For instance, six month ago, environment of Delhi, capital of I...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...in developed realm especially for other countries passport holder. Recently, from news re...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...elation between countries. As a result, many time in history wars had been occur and indi...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...ult, many time in history wars had been occur and indirectly effect on national econo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76811594203 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08033241795 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7896316044 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179155219853 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536461581912 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054360790339 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099725197877 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648960228114 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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