Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
The issue of charging numerous museums whilst others are exempt is becoming more serious currently. From my point of view, this statement has more the advantages than the disadvantages for several reasons.
To begin with, a role of museums, in which people tend to come and see the cultural heritage from famous artists to historical weapons. Charging for visiting museums is not crucial, depending on the variety of exhibitions and the status of the museum. Because museums provide its integrity and keep safe the diversity of its elements.
In addition, in the museums people are not only looking to the exhibition but also encountering and perceiving knowledge about history, which altered during the last centuries. For instance, guides, who are working for the museums and have an enormous knowledge about history, may help the visitors to know more about any exhibition, its function or usage in a particular historical moment. However, it depends on the experience of the guide and the questions from people.
Also, the museums is a place, where people can try and see a different world and charging for it may not be so crucial. People rarely need to distract from a routine life, and the museums give an opportunity to see the world from either a positive or a negative angle.
Even many museums charge for admission, the advantages such as looking to cultural heritages, knowing more about history, or distracting from daily life outweigh its disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234200743494 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.144981412639 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0855018587361 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0520446096654 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0260223048327 0.0437548338989 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130111524164 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0483271375465 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75760404878 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297397769517 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115241635688 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111524163569 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148698884758 0.011925033212 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1531.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35269709544 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394190871369 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.331950207469 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228215767635 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124481327801 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75760404878 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.6545039436 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9090909091 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7463429379 49.517814964 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 55.104111656 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.85 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463084233131 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127458719586 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0672201278631 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.703476297326 0.534860350844 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115144262231 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214966569868 0.134430193775 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556029114202 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32096399097 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105701126157 0.0638462369009 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297026185079 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383790582595 0.058150111329 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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