Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh this disadvanteges?
Lots of museums charge fees while others do not. In my opinion, it is important to everyone access to relics and arts then generating money. Therefore, I think that the benefits of charging people fees do not outweigh the backdrowns. The governments should supply free cost in any events related culture and custom.
On the other hand, there are someone who argue that museums might unsustainable without charge fees. There are some reasons for this ideas. Firstly, some people works in the museums who cannot earn money from tickets sales if the museums are free for everybody. Besides, people can get more knowledge and experience when go there, rather than none at all. They pay money and they have more knowledge about culture of the country. So, I think that the governments supply the money for these places and encounrage people going there to development both knowledge and experience aspect.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages for this charging fees. Firstly, this can restricted the high proportion of the population coming the museums, especially in less development countries. Many people in poorer countries just have enough for food and accommodation. In additions, childrens and students cannot visit the museums because they does not have enough money for tickets. It is really a huge hole for education in the country. Children and students have more curiously for the outside world. So, this can restricted for their research.
In conclusion, I think that the government should cover the cost for the museums as another places because culture and custom plays an important role than any things so that everyone in the world can get more opportunities to research in the real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, really, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08510638298 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6112488954 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5739858233 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371110039986 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124303536315 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956670738762 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217153061406 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697115878253 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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