Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Despite knowing about the tendency¬¬ of criminals keep committing more unlawful acts after their first punishment, the public authorities have yet to find effective measures to address these on-going problems. this essay will examine the main causes and possible solution for this.
The main cause of this concerning issue is due to the fact that these offenders, after being released, most of them tend to be unable to find the acceptance within their society. In some countries, even these people have completed serving their period of punishment, however, people around still consider them as outcasts due to their past mistakes. Although this could be understandable, nonetheless, this social norm would contribute to the extreme isolation for these offenders. provided they are unable to find a job to earn a sufficient income to cover their living expenses, as a result, they might be forced to keep committing illegal activities, for example, robbing or even human trafficking in the case of extreme individuals.
government incentives and society’s acceptance certainly can make effective efforts to reduce this current social issue. For government, an effective solution is to provide these offenders with re-educated programs on how to interact with the society after a long period of time of banishment. By doing this, they might as well be able to find a suitable method to adapt to the new environment. families and friends may want to take more responsibilities for the impact they have on these individuals. they should welcome these ex-convicts to be a part of their families again. It has been proven that nothing is more important than being accepted and forgiven by the people they love.
In conclusion, government and families must play their part in looking after these former prisoners. For the most part, they are just some people who lost their tracks along the way and, depend on what crimes they committed, they deserve a second chance in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.303125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82918488427 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3165943642 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266580099271 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925754626616 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414052766903 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168118448883 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516003301437 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.