Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes.
It is argued that global tourism that is the most important revenue of some nations has negative impact on destination countries. Because of the emergency of these burden, some solutions are supposed to be considered by governments in order to solve these problems.
There are two primary causes that local dwellers consider international tourism as a reason of serious problems in their countries. The first reason is that it may have a plenty of effects on environment. To be specific, foreign tourists are more likely to litter and pollute beautiful spots or landscapes, especially Asian tourists. Besides, a vast number of travelers who take trips to a same destination at the same time put a high level of pressure on local sanitation. The rest cause is that it leads to the deterioration of infrastructure, especially buildings, works of art or artefacts that are important to history. For example, tourists tend to touch buddha statues or divine sculptures in order to receive some luck for themselves or their families despite the cautions of non-touching.
Measures must be taken by not only local authorities and also international tourism agencies. Firstly, global tourism agencies should warn and inform carefully for their travelers about protection of local habitats and should enact some regulations to punish some tourists who do not follow the regulations. Besides, local governments should extract an appropriate part of revenue that is paid by tourism enterprises for the innovation of sanitary facilities at the same time. Another solution is that local authorities should impose some strict law on the intentional deterioration of infrastructure. In additional, board of management of tourism destination also should establish closed circuit television systems in order to monitor and determine exactly those who have deteriorated behaviors and announce instantly at the same time for the warning.
In conclusion, it is undeniable true that tourism industry is bring us a great deal of profits, but it also poses some serious threats to local places. Because of these negative influences, local government should enact urgent policies that address these problems.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...ndeniable true that tourism industry is bring us a great deal of profits, but it also...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43988269795 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05077247599 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7424327286 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145845280382 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522342654576 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409631571839 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862962720112 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281984549607 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...ndeniable true that tourism industry is bring us a great deal of profits, but it also...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43988269795 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05077247599 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7424327286 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145845280382 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522342654576 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409631571839 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862962720112 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281984549607 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.