Many people believe that an international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?
there is a widespread belief that foreign tourism has a negative effect on the host nation. While there is a strong case for this view, solutions must be applied to resolve some of the serious issues which have risen.
there are two primary factors that cause local resident to hold on the aforementioned belief. Firstly, the foreigners might be insensitive to local culture, which their actions may be disrespectful to people in the area. For example, in Vietnam, it is highly recommended to avoid wearing short clothes when visiting pagodas. However, some of international tourists do not follow the rules, and as the result, they have to stay outside the attraction and receive unfriendly attitude from local people. Secondly, tourists from other countries might throw away the gabbage unrespectively to the local enviroment, which will result in local pollution.
Measures must be taken by national authorities and international bodies in order to cease the negative impacts. One solution is the benefit of international tourism must be illustrated to local residents. The undoubted economical benefits of foreign tourism ought to be widely promoted through the official media. At the same time, the fact that tourists buy the local handcrafts as souvenirs, use local services and so on, which create more occupation for domestic resident, should be publicised. Another method is the regulation of tourists violences against their violences on local must be carried out with the aim of tourists will follow and enjoy local culture.
In conclusion, only by addressing the concerns of local people will negatives attitude to international tourism be changed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: recommended avoiding
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'negative'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39694656489 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8857183161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9506191926 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214892642899 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090976227522 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787677090376 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167663597246 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782999545257 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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