Many people believe that the social networking sites (such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree?
These days social media websites have expanded to great extent. Some people assert that social media have a great on influence on the people’s life and it brings immense benefits for society. On the contrary, others contend that these websites have detrimental effects on individual and society. from my perspective, I partially agree with the given topic, it could have both benefits and certain drawbacks as discussed below.
To begin with, it is quite apparent to say that social communication websites are playing vital in many different aspects; it brought enormous advantages in human life. One illustration of this is that non-government organization and charitable hospitals and other organization, which are working for betterment of the society could do free advertisement on their pages whenever they needs charity. Another good purpose of these websites could be spreading of positive words through quotes and status, can help individual who is suffering from sadness and anxiety.
To put the topic into perspective, another advantage which is worth considering is that it could help people to find their love ones during the cataclysm of earthquakes and tsunami. Furthermore these social media websites have proved to bring the people together. For instance nowadays, people in different part of the world are becoming friend on Facebook and getting information about others culture, tradition and social aspects.
Yet there is a dark side of the picture, which advocates that social media also responsible for creating tension in the society, like people attacking of others religions and believes. We should not lose the sight of the fact that children are also fond of using social media, some content which are inappropriate for children, now parents are more conscious that these content could lead to a negative impact on their developments.
To recapitulate, it is indeed a debatable topic which needs further analysis and discussion. However, in the light above discussed arguments and examples, it would quite safe to conclude that benefits of social media website outweigh the negative aspects. The disadvantages should be thought as the certain price which we needs to pay due to characteristics of society we live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38983050847 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87268552572 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3703616558 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188895199576 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675347218165 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458954958722 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102884588973 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633386571273 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.