Nowadays, in a fast-changing world, more emphasis is given on education. The topic on whether women are better parents than man has sparked lots of debate.
Some individuals believe that women make better parents than men. The reason behind this are, in comparison to men, women usually spend more time with their children. Because they are less engaged in working. Moreover, genetically most mothers are more patient and less aggressive than father. Hence, they have better quality in taking care of their kids. At last, traditionally as a role of mother, women can transfer their experience to their daughter to become the perfect mothers in future.
In contrast, others do not agree with the idea. They claim that men play more significant role in their children’s life than women. It is a general belief that men are the breadwinner in a family, which means they take the most responsibility for the financial part. Due to this reason, father can provide a good living environment to their kids. Also, Fathers are usually more serious in punishing than mothers, in order to control the children avoid crime. Additionally, as a result of long working experiences, father usually give better advice on their children’s future career.
In conclusion, I am in favor of the former opinion. In general, mothers give more company to their kids which are the key factors to a successful education. Despite this, father’s role means a lot to children’s life which cannot be replaced. I suggest that it is better to share responsibilities as much as sharing love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12741312741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93514011248 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0618804752 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7777777778 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260124583561 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847552748794 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876687880553 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153270469945 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800608465983 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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