MANY PEOPLE THESE DAYS PLAY DANGEROUS SPORTS. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
The importance of playing dangerous sports which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my opinion the both conflicting sides appear to be rational due to the following reasons.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost benefit is the physical and mental development (term) .By this it means that when players play extreme sports like bungee jumping, parachuting and scuba diving, then these players overcome from their fears like hydrophobia, height-phobia and many others. They become more risk-taking. Activities like mountain climbing also leads players to become physically strong like improving their stamina, flexibility and strength. Another striking benefit in this regard is that one can become famous and earn money. For example, there are many instructors who themselves play these risk-taking activities to earn livelihoods and they also make record. This leads them to become famous world-wide and get fame for their country as their records are mentioned in the Guinness Book of the World Records
In contrast, one of the main underlying demerit stems from the fact is that playing adventurous games can be life-risking. If by any chance there is an incident then a player may get died or injured which is a stupidity. What is more? Playing any dangerous sports could waste a lot of precious time and money. There are many youngsters in my country and what I have seen is that they go to destinations like Manali in India, where they perform dangerous activities at the cost of losing their interests in their career and studies. Players have to pay an exorbitant amount of money to take part in risky activities.
To conclude, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that while there are aforementioned benefits, the drawbacks must not be overlooked.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ir fears like hydrophobia, height-phobia and many others. They become more risk-t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, in contrast, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24679487179 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84215003379 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9899419473 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18796111975 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635292203306 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742232455193 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104028266647 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664104386231 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the physical and mental development term .By this it means that when players play ...
^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...e physical and mental development term .By this it means that when players play ex...
^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir fears like hydrophobia, height-phobia and many others. They become more risk-t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, in contrast, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24679487179 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84215003379 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9899419473 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18796111975 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635292203306 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742232455193 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104028266647 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664104386231 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.