Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful for old people. However, this section of population is the fewer users of mobile phones and the Internet. In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be useful to the old people? How can the old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
Although advanced technologies such as cellphones and the Internet, it is observed that few the elderly use them. There are several benefits of using cellphones and the Internet and some effective methods should be taken to encourage the old to apply these technologies.
To begin with, it is undeniable that cellphones and the Internet bring significant advantages for the elderly. Firstly, it is the easiest ways for them to keep contact with their children or friend by making calls. Smart phones server calls, video calls and connect the Internet while the Internet supports several free communicating ways for people to contact directly such as facebook, vibe, skype. Therefore, the elderly are probably to meet their friends and children almost time they want by using these application. As a result, old people do not feel lonely anymore. Secondly, old people often weak, being likely to go out as adults, so they may access alot of information for entertainment and online shopping. For example, they might order food, clothes and transfer money through the Internet. They also read online books without going library or they can watch extremely interesting movies.
However, there are several efficient remedies to promote the elderly to use these technologies. Owing to their age, it is a bit difficult for them to approach new technologies. Thus, their children should teach them how to use, showing them clear benefits of the technologies which will attract them to use. In addition, senior citizens usually have weak eyesight, so they should buy cell phones, computers or other devices which have big keyboards and screens to see easily. When understanding and using clearly, I believe that senior citizens may spend much time on them.
In conclusion, although approaching new technologies is difficult for the elderly, there are some advantages for using them. It is also responsible for families’ members to motivate and support to take benefits for old generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'phones'' or 'phone's'?
Suggestion: phones'; phone's
...ildren or friend by making calls. Smart phones server calls, video calls and connect t...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this application' or 'these applications'?
Suggestion: this application; these applications
...children almost time they want by using these application. As a result, old people do not feel lo...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt to take benefits for old generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29968454259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78815817179 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5195708974 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8235294118 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261197730864 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819079168589 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544876099206 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15724570136 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707811822988 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.