Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Types of advance communication in 21st century have changed the way people to connect each other. For instance, electronic messaging and email have decreased the frequency of face-to-face interaction among societies. Owing to this fact, some people believe that those modern technologies have caused negative impact to human’s social lives. However, I argue that people should consider other aspects of this issue.
In the past, people kept in touch with others by direct interaction and also form of traditional communication such as letter. They used to meet each other when they had time, usua...
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wait for long time although they have long distance.
wait for a long time although they have a long distance.
direct interactions still ongoing in this era.
direct interactions are still ongoing in this era.
it has made more effortless
it has made it more effortless
bring positive effect
bring positive effects
and have improved societies network.
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