More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full-time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the context of parenting children is increasingly prioritized, the number of fathers who quit his job to look after their children are rising. Therefore, it has become a hotly debated. Personally, I think fathers can also bring up their nursling as well as mothers, and it is apparent that having caregiver is better than no one for children.
Nowadays, man's role is extended. They can basically do well in all the works that woman who are more skillful and meticulous frequently do. For instance: tend their children, do household chores, etc. However, most of the people still think men is head of a family, they should earn money to support their family and defend them from every possible hazard while domestic chores are women's work. That is an erroneous conception since ancient times. It seems that everyone realizes men have got the physical ability and can not appreciate the feelings as women. By enlarging the position of men and women, the figures of fathers resign their job to stay home and rear their progenies are growing.
More important, children need parents' attention. If both of parents are work full-time, they will not have much time to near and care for their children. That is not profitable for their offspring from health to spirit. Lack of parents' management and consideration, the children will be promptly spoiled. Simultaneously, they also have highly hazard are contract diseases, encounter unnecessary accidents, etc. A child always needs attention thus one of the parents need to leave employment whether it is father or mother.
In conclusion, the changing of gender roles are an apt trend, and it is beneficial to family, children and society's future. Taking care of children is the responsibility of both father and mother, thus parents must learn the way to share the work and jointly building their own family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69317741481 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5876858381 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450672774252 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119257067894 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100193797366 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24872803608 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045373124347 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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