More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is argued that the migration from countryside to major cities is becoming an increasingly widespread concern. Many people think that immigrant people would have to face some variously difficult problems, so governments should take some solutions to improve the urban living standard.
There are a variety of difficulties that the immigrants have to deal with when they come to cities to reside. Firstly, accommodation problem is a big/huge issue that the newcomer would encounter. This is due to the fact that more and more people are flocking to urban areas, which leads to the growing population of those major cities and the shortage of available land for the living. Secondly, the settler will feel rather hard to adapt themselves to the new living environment if they come and start up a business. Therefore, they might have to take a long time to conform to the local way of life that the urban citizens observe.
The government of those countries should address this problem by some practical ways to ensure the living conditions for each resident. The first solution is that the authorities could provide more housing areas for newcomers through the construction of new buildings. This may result in mitigating the lack of accommodation of immigrant people. Furthermore, the local administrators should encourage the immigrants to attend social activities as well as work at regional companies. As a consequence, they will feel welcomed and respected by urban residents, so they could blend into the new habitat easily.
In conclusion, the government should help the settlers to solve several difficult issues when they come to dwell and work in metropolitan areas to guarantee a better life for everyone.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19424460432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88408463915 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1441177945 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236928376667 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703426830041 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058872003882 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144497374402 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403570891072 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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