Every country's prison system has a crucial role in maintaining the law and order of that country. No one can think of a country without a proper correction facilities. It's a system that we have been following since the civilization and still have it's relevance in the present scenario. Recently some people are demanding a prison free system, they argue that educating the law brakers will be the better solution than imprisonment. I agree to this statement to some extent.
To begin with, if we take the example of lowest crime recorded countries, they all have one thing in common. Which is none other than a perfect prison system and strict rules and regulations. Experts says that fear about strict punishments are the most powerful factor that restricting many others from becoming law breaker. Moreover criminal experts says that, every person has some darkest side buried deep inside in their mind, so relaxed rules and regulations would be an open invitation to those kind of people.
On the contrary, educating violators some what effective in certain situations like when people who commit crimes accidentally. In such situations giving long term prison statements may affect the convict behaviour negatively because of the inmates bad influence. Furthermore, education can be used as precaution against crime, if people are well aware of the crime factors and it's consequences they definitely think twice before committing something wrong. On top of that, these educational approach create a friendly atmosphere in people's mind so, whenever a crime occurs they approach the law without any fear and misconceptions.
To recapitulate, I think it is better to adopt the combination of these two systems for an effective peace keeping. We can not say that one system works in all the situations. So the blend of these two practices will help the countries to maintain good correction system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, i think, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80907640221 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624595469256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0711166996 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250373092178 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729692660809 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708361116519 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1312820439 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534914090802 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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