Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.Do you agree?
In the modern corporate world, the senior managements often are filled with men. There is an on-going debate whether should these companies make a requirement on the percentage of women in those senior positions. I agree that a company should have more women in the management team, but it should not be a requirement.
There are several benefits to have women in the senior management team. Women are often able to make decision in a less emotional way. A woman with a great vision is able to thrive the company through the hard times compare to man. Report shows that a company with a mixture of male and female executives is able to perform 30% more efficiently than a company with all male executives. For instances, there are many female chief executive officer in company such as IBM and Pepsi helped the company expand and be profitable. To achieve these success, they have to be bold in making hard decisions.
Besides, women are great thinkers and knowledgable. Research shown that women read more than men. In addition, they have a greater memory compare to men. With the knowledge from constant reading, they are able to apply it in day to day life. It enable women to come out with brilliant ideas or second opinion in a discussion which tend to discover an alternative solution to the problem.
To conclude, many companies should not be skeptical on hiring or promoting female executive. They are as capable as their male colleagues in handling problems and bring the company to a greater height.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...corporate world, the senior managements often are filled with men. There is an on-going d...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... often are filled with men. There is an on-going debate whether should these companies m...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'officers'?
Suggestion: officers
..., there are many female chief executive officer in company such as IBM and Pepsi helped...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this success' or 'these successes'?
Suggestion: this success; these successes
...ny expand and be profitable. To achieve these success, they have to be bold in making hard de...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enables'?
Suggestion: enables
...able to apply it in day to day life. It enable women to come out with brilliant ideas ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.143859649123 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.129824561404 0.0946595960268 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0280701754386 0.0501214627716 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0315789473684 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112280701754 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0245614035088 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62253265276 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0326793684256 161% => OK
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00163938923432 214% => OK
Determiners: 0.101754385965 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140350877193 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00350877192982 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1518.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83846153846 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338461538462 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246153846154 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165384615385 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111538461538 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62253265276 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.4451719244 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3401034791 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 40.8653846154 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.91379310345 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385618249686 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12364305154 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776870147543 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501888862727 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127022844354 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148048439419 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429713317134 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315322733663 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0759195507618 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258388013919 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415404257315 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.