Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, peoplenowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent discussion on festivals, there is an argument that people nowadays are likely to take opportunities of traditional or religious festivals to have fun and no longer remember the meaning of them. I totally admit that enjoyment seem to be the priority during festival period, however, forgetting what these festival mean is against my agreement.
It is undeniable fact that traditional or religious festivals have certainly been the period for celebrations all over the world. People during Christmas, for example, take time to go shopping, to decorate their houses, to have dinner together and to give presents to each other. Likewise, family gathers together on Mid-Autumn in China, Vietnam or Chuseok in Korea and watch children participating in the parades in the dark under the full moon with lanterns of various forms, shapes and colors or adults could join tin floating sky lanterns activity. Enjoyment is an indispensable part of the festivals, in other words, it is people’s primary goal.
The fact that the underlying meaning of the celebrations have been forgotten or ignored, however, is my strongest disagreement. Children nowadays have been taught about the reason why there is Christmas and the meaning of this period as well as a variety of traditional or religious festivals in other regions. Christmas song have been sung during its period and plays have been performed in churches telling the story of Jesus’s birth. Remember the meaning behind the festivals gives people chances to look back at their cultures, to remind them of their ancestors and to enhance the happier lives. Family plays an important and essential role in passing these knowledge of festivals to the next generation.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that during traditional religious festivals, though people often have demand on enjoying themselves, I still think they also have awareness of the meaning behind these celebrations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this festival' or 'these festivals'?
Suggestion: this festival; these festivals
...stival period, however, forgetting what these festival mean is against my agreement. It is un...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...important and essential role in passing these knowledge of festivals to the next generation. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, look, so, still, well, for example, as well as, by the way, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.303514377 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89144264123 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5257772495 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295221493632 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108889936643 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562112625826 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189916038394 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248900737586 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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