Newspapers publish information about the private lives of celebrities. Some people think that government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published. While, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Media is called the mirror of every society as it portrays the every sector prevailing in the country. Presently, some folks propounded that the demonstration of private affairs of celebrities on media forms such as newspapers is unfair and must be restrained by the administration. By contrast, others have conflicting views.
Here, this essay intends to account for both views with my own perception.
There are numerous points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, the publication of personal information can lead to privacy concerns and insecurities. This right should be snatched ...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The third paragraph is not closely related to 'government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 409 350
No. of Characters: 2182 1500
No. of Different Words: 249 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.497 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.335 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.007 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 69 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.84 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.247 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.434 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e celebrities have family controversies, personal love affairs, broken relationsh...
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Line 8, column 244, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...nt cricketer Rohit Sharma made a record of highest centuries in a World Cup tournament. Hi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f success is highlighted by a newspaper, describing His personal background, fa...
^^
Line 8, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... highlighted by a newspaper, describing His personal background, family life, st...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50366748166 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11531166263 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601466992665 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5488866952 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.318181818 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112537602401 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326545063442 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349223006856 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477431242747 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403684315824 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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