Noise pollution has been a serious issue in many countries nowadays. Some people think that it should be strictly controlled, others think that they could make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that being a citizen of democratic society one has the right to act and express as per their liking such as making noise, but many people believe that freedom of expression in high decibel should be regulated. In my opinion, it is better to control noise rigorously.
One the one hand, people argue that they are free to do and act whatever they like. From the point of view of proponents , this is their fundamental right and making noise should be sole preference of an individual. For example, sport events like football, birthday parties or recreational activities which the noise reach a peak despite its adverse effects. In addition, making noise might stimulate creativity. It is common to catch sight of many people standing in the lobby and shouting out loud or singing songs due to the fact that only by doing these can they feel refreshed, recharged and stimulate the proactive action of neurons in their brain according to scientific research.
On the other hand, it is undeniable its negative impacts on many aspects of life. High decibel noise is the primary culprit of several health problems such as deafness, sleep disturbance and stress-related illness. For instance, no sooner did a person hold parties with the sound of loud music blaring out neighbors’ window than it could deprive them of falling asleep. Admittedly, the price of treatment could cost an arm and a leg so that few people can cover it. Besides, constant noise can be conducive to disordered social security. With the appearance of karaoke bar in the town, the surrounding can be affected profoundly, followed by the onset of social anarchy. Therefore, control the level of noise seems as useful solution in order to mitigate its effects in long run.
In conclusion, although people should respect the right of making constant noise, measures to control it should be introduced to protect people health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.996875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65186081032 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5577777363 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249639010848 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801425184924 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418038084074 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151506811292 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330734741325 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.