Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the development of the advertising industry, children are being bombarded with loads of advertisements. Some believe that this way of product promotion has impacts on future generations and should be forbidden. Although I agree with the former, I would argue against the ban on ads.
To commence, placing adverts aimed at children may create false beliefs in them about the products. In other words, they will be misled by the information in promotional videos that claim to have powerful effects on their health. Take for example the ads for Hero, a kind of milk made by Vinamilk, which shows the images of a hero who has superpowers thanks to having the milk on a daily basis. Also, by exaggerating the features of the goods, ads stimulate children to make wrong buying decisions. They will soon get fed up with it or in some cases, the items bought are not as good as they had expected.
Despite the aforementioned minus points, I strongly believe that it is not necessary to put an end to ads whose target is immature kids owing to the merits they have. First, watching advertisements can be considered an excellent form of entertainment. Some advertisements are hilarious and include catchy tunes with easy-to-remember lyrics, hence encouraging children to sing and dance along. Moreover, it is also a huge source of information. Children can be provided with knowledge about different aspects of life while enjoying themselves. For instance, an advertisement for a hand wash raises their awareness about personal hygiene. Most importantly, this promotion approach allows parents and children to make comparisons regarding prices, and quality of the products. By doing this, they can make the best choice of goods.
All things considered, although I show my approval of the idea that ads directed at young children may do certain harm to their decision-making and belief about the good, showing adverts is necessary not only to develop the businesses themselves but also beneficial to parents and children’s shopping habits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15060240964 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0073638273 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617469879518 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5427627958 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.588235294 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258562394305 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776978082272 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427106084719 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151796419366 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388800671573 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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