Over past few years, self-employment has become the first preference of most of the people.They consider it a better option in comparison with working in the company or an organisation.In my opinion, there are some reasons for this trend and there are also some drawbacks for this option.
To begin with, many masses are in the favour of working for themselves due to some reasons.First of all it helps them to be a self-dependent and also to be a out of subordinate person.Moreover they do not like to do work under company's rules, which are annoying them. Similarly, self-employed people can do their professional tasks with their own style and comfort.Secondly, nowadays, there is shortage of jobs around the world, but doing work on their own level people can eliminate this problem of jobless.Furhermore, self-employment also enables people to spend quality time with their family and friends, that may not be possible at the time of doing job for an other organisation.Because of these reasons, personal business has become first priority of an individual.
On the other hand, in personal business, workers have risk to lose their money.This is because people have to face a lot of problems on their own.For example, if they run a company, then they will have to provide adequate finance and management system for the company.This cannot be done by one single person.However, in the company, all important aspects are managed by expert employees, that further contributes in the prosperity of that company. Adding to this, a person works under some rules and regulations in a company, that is necessary to make a company successful, but in personal business there are no such type of rules to be followed.Therefore, self employment seems risky sometimes.
In conclusion, no doubt, there are a number of advantages of self employment such as intention to away from the control of others, good chance for better life while, self employed workers face problems like the risk of breaking down business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29118811251 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.700958958 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.0 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.7667163134 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.1666666667 7.06120827912 498% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275857961936 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148933845144 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538952815415 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157593567718 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511247423118 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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