Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or
organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

A large section of society has inclination towards starting up a business venture. People, in the modern times, like to be the employer rather than the employee. This essay will state the reason of this practice in the first paragraph, and in the second paragraph disadvantages will be mentioned along with the supporting examples.

Nobody nowadays likes to be dominated and intimidated. As it is for a known fact believed that an employee is held accountable for the any sort of mishaps and delay in work. Moreover, there is a huge profit margin in owning an enterprise because the owners generally have a direct contact with the client. For instance, the innovator of Microsoft Bill gates has successfully found his niche, and generating a million dollars quarterly. Therefore innumerable number of people desire to achieve the same level of success like other entrepreneurs.

A startup in the beginning demands a colossal amount of investment for promising gains and stability in the market. In addition to that, a person is less disciplined when there is no authority to control their actions. Firstly, there is no guarantee of lucrative outcome secondly, head of the organisation in general do not follow the schedule which can hamper the monetary benefits. Without adequate resources and assistance it is insurmountable. Like, in first few years plethora of firms go bankrupt and are bound to sell their liquid assets to cover the losses. As a result, it is not an easy task to accomplish and comes with several risks.

In a nutshell, it is advocated that one must try to establish a company considering the factors stated above. As it is easier said than done, the consequence of a failed operation must not be taken lightly.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty has inclination towards starting up a business venture. People, in the modern ...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...generating a million dollars quarterly. Therefore innumerable number of people desire to ...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...t is insurmountable. Like, in first few years plethora of firms go bankrupt and are b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in general, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0276816609 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90444393827 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1593058933 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213276206291 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580411013568 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817814524943 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117038972713 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730054407814 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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