: Nowadays many people spend too much their time on shopping malls. Some people fear that this has negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree of disagree?
There is sufficient evidence to infer that in recent years, people have a tendency to consume a great deal of time on shopping malls. While this trend has certain positive impacts, I believe that it has more disadvantageous influences on the young generation and the community.
From my perspective, there are several valuable effects on the young citizens and the society. Firstly, it is undeniable that this trend can make a contribution to increase the wealth of the government, followed by boosting the market’s revenue. Only by setting the habit of purchasing products on shopping malls, can customers facilitate the highly beneficial income on the economy of the country. Secondly, it is clear that shopping malls are the destinations which provide a wide range of food and high-quality products. Therefore, they are not only convenient places to purchase, but also places can easily gain the credence of consumers.
On the other hand, it is obvious that this tendency has a myriad of detrimental consequences, which outweigh its advantageous outcomes. Firstly, while youngsters waste a huge of their time on shopping malls, it is no doubt that they will lack time for several valuable aspects of their life, such as education or entertainment purposes. Secondly, these days, young customers have no clear idea about what they should buy before going to the shopping malls, which lead to the regular situation that they purchase certain products without careful consideration. Hence, it may constitute the rising popularity of food wastage in the case of the fact that young consumers store a great variety of unnecessary food and this critical issue needs to be taken into consideration in certain nations.
In conclusion, whether detrimental influences of this trend outweigh its profitable impacts is a controversial issue but I would argue that it has more disadvantageous outcomes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30132450331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04066737496 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4834499792 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180138952404 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582691762615 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453759255912 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983413954278 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547492322744 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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