Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Nowadays, many young people decide to not have children when they are young. This problem is caused by some factors, and it has some effect on society and family life.
There are some reasons why many people want to have babies later in their life. Firstly, since modern life is very difficult, the young generation prefers to achieve a higher position in their company and in social life. As a result, they do not want to split their time for having babies. Secondly, since taking care of a baby is time-consuming jobs, young people have less time to enjoy their lives. For example, if they do not have a baby, they can spend leisure time discovering and traveling around the world.
However, this tendency might bring about some negative effects on society. Firstly, raising kids could be challenging for older parents. The gap between two generations might make them hard to communicate and understand each other. Secondly, in long-term, the labor workforce for the country can be affected. The labor shortage in some industries may occur due to the declining of the young employees.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why many young people decide to have babies later and this tendency might create some negative effects on society and family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00473933649 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42970395068 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4644489156 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250403847867 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917816704617 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913232536645 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170400452243 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966242393386 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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