Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In some nations, the ubiquitous trend amongst households is that couples make a decision to give birth to children late in life. This issue is caused by a host of reasons and this essay will argue that despite some dangers of babies’ health, its benefits far outweigh any drawbacks.
There are numerous reasons why both men and women have a tendency to have children late in life. First of all, couples, especially married ones have a preference for savoring the private space before welcoming a new member. In fact, nowadays, a large number of wives and husbands spend about a year participating in interesting activities together such as going on a honeymoon or travelling in order to intensify the bond as well as love for each other. Secondly, men and women have a strong desire to achieve great success before giving birth to babies. That is because having children is synonymous with the fact the expenditure on each aspect will rise dramatically. Therefore, accomplishments are regarded as an integral factor in guaranteeing the stability of the family.
This tendency brings colossal dire repercussions. Evidently, giving birth late at night can make an adverse impact on children’s physical condition and mental health. For example, in accordance with some digital sources of reliable news, children given birth by women who at their 30s or more can have the risk of getting severe diseases like autism or DOWN syndrome. However, these drawbacks are possibly pale in comparison with the benefits. Obviously, having children late in life can provide wives and husbands with more time to prepare both finance and mentality. For instance, they can strive to save a large amount of money for bearing and raising babies in the future or become ready to take parental responsibility to take care of them. The result of this is that family life is likely to be steadier and parents will have more time spent on playing with babies, which is extremely beneficial for children’s comprehensive development.
In conclusion, the decision of having babies late of women and men in some countries has a myriad of contributing factors. In spite of some dangers of deteriorating children’s health, it is much better for couples to give birth late in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...coming a new member. In fact, nowadays, a large number of wives and husbands spend about a year p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06434316354 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8385103865 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3730404841 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208191717657 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677609575471 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620940431953 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120882963636 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404588955744 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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