Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
News is one of the highly significant factors that affect human lives. The number of individuals who read the latest news and relevant data online are dramatically increasing, where as many people still believe in the power of the newspaper to deliver important facts. This essay agrees that newspaper is still the most reliable piece of information because it can be purchased by people living in far-flung areas and it is convenient.
It is true that internet coverage can provide news to most part of the world, however, there are still vast areas, especially in developing countries, have no access online due to either the lack of coverage or the high price of service. According to some statistician, in the Philippines alone, there is approximately 15% in the rural areas have no internet gateway, and this is because the land is difficult to traverse. Therefore, people can only acquire news by buying newspaper in the nearby market.
Another reason why I support the newspaper's reliability to give information is convenience. Newspaper is accessible for everyone and it is available everywhere such as in convenient store, in mall, and from street vendors. In the Philippines, newspaper can be bought from sellers alongside of the streets, so people can buy it instantly when they are on the rush.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have their merits. However, it seems that newspaper is the most sought piece of information because of its availability and convenience that it can bring to citizens living in out of reach areas. Given this situation, government and private organization should seek ways on how to make internet accessible to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91208795346 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1621403787 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19174384247 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685842040892 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393634983697 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113913975446 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488847953318 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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