Theseday, people have two contrasting viewpoints about the question of whether the authorities should empower the young generation to hold the crucial roles. While some individuals opine that this phenomenon should be restrict, I believe that is a positive signal for the development.
It is indisputable that the young people might be too childish to take over some positions that influence vast citizens in a city or a nation. In particular, the government have to treat numerous tasks, including education, healthcare, public order and traffic tissue, which effect on occupation, life and future of residents in a city or a nation. This jobs requires a person that must be experienced, knowledgeable to ensure the balance development for society. Meanwhile, the young generation usually is immature and infantile, which aids to that they make some decision or resolve any problems subjectively and hastily. Hence, authorizing vital roles in the government to the youth might cause the imbalance progression or the equality in society.
However, the youthful workforce could brings a breakthrough to the progression for the systems. This is mainly because that by fondness for learning and thirsty for research, the young people would own vast precious skill. To illustrate this, they have a theoretical knowledge and practice skill about technology, which lead to the development of digital operation for the government. In addition, they could enable to communicate with a foreign authorities because of the expertise of many language. As long as the advanced domestic systems and approaching the international culture, they gain the progressive though appropriating the demand and the expectation of residents.
In conclusion, I believe that more and more important positions in the government holden by the young people are essential to develop the society.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...e have two contrasting viewpoints about the question of whether the authorities should empower the youn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'restricted'?
Suggestion: restricted
...ls opine that this phenomenon should be restrict, I believe that is a positive signal fo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'require'.
Suggestion: require
...idents in a city or a nation. This jobs requires a person that must be experienced, know...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...ociety. Meanwhile, the young generation usually is immature and infantile, which aids to t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... However, the youthful workforce could brings a breakthrough to the progression for t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'authority'?
Suggestion: authority
...ld enable to communicate with a foreign authorities because of the expertise of many langua...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'many languages'.
Suggestion: many languages
...authorities because of the expertise of many language. As long as the advanced domestic syste...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48263888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09994391813 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2947294735 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182427381974 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642307932296 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874192736099 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14784059214 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106839854396 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...e have two contrasting viewpoints about the question of whether the authorities should empower the youn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'restricted'?
Suggestion: restricted
...ls opine that this phenomenon should be restrict, I believe that is a positive signal fo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'require'.
Suggestion: require
...idents in a city or a nation. This jobs requires a person that must be experienced, know...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...ociety. Meanwhile, the young generation usually is immature and infantile, which aids to t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... However, the youthful workforce could brings a breakthrough to the progression for t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'authority'?
Suggestion: authority
...ld enable to communicate with a foreign authorities because of the expertise of many langua...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'many languages'.
Suggestion: many languages
...authorities because of the expertise of many language. As long as the advanced domestic syste...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48263888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09994391813 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2947294735 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182427381974 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642307932296 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874192736099 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14784059214 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106839854396 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.