Somebody said that household chores and office work were being operated by cyborgs these days. From my personal perspective, I actually think that it has two opposite sides. This essay will show you my opinion about the statement
Beginning with overview, robot is invented to deliver the needs and hobbies of human. In fact, it is working smoothly and efficiently although there are some issues which could not be solved. First of all, people have a lot of kinds of robot which can do the housework for us. For instance, a robot called “vacumn robot”, which is invented to help the housewives clean the house without waste of time and effort. Another reason for the advantage of having a robot is helping the office work complete quickly and efficiently. Frankly, office robot can do many things that human has difficulties in at the office including assistant work, sales, operating the function,… Moreover, robot can carry out the heavy work which humans get obstacle.
On the other hand, robot has its own disadvantages in a large number of aspects. For example, the cyborgs need a supply of power, hence it costs more than the others who do not own one, people have to consider carefully before paying for it. Furthermore, robots could take many factory workers’ places so that they have a problem called unemployment. In fact, unemployment rates in developed countries are rising up due to the appearance of modern artificial intelligence. For those points, people should create more solutions to solve them before having to regret.
To conclude, having a robot to deliver in house or office is becoming common in both developed and developing countries. However, there are a lot of problems to clarify and solve thoroughly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, frankly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03460207612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68404626581 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1913968546 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198539257653 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613374679366 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323282344613 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107315337402 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317275225287 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.