Nowadays, people change their appearance by dying hair, buying fashionable clothes, wearing make-ups, and even undergoing plastic surgery. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the contemporary era, individuals have become more fashionable and they love to enjoy wearing make-ups, western outfits, colouring the hair, moreover some undergo plastic surgeries for enhancing their beauty. In the following paragraphs I will explain the reasons of using beauty products by the masses as well as its adverse consequences on thepeople.
To commence with, there are plethora of reasons that depict the high influence of people towards vogue and beauty. Firstly, individual are more beauty conscious today, so to enhance their personality , people adopt various ways to uplift their beauty. In addition to this, plenty of adverts whether on television ,newspaper , magazines etcetera are influencing people by providing different strategies that can benefit them and will eventually makes them attractive. For example- fair and lovely company claims that their beauty products are advantageous for glowing skin of the person, which outrageously attracting thousands of people to use it especially in India.Secondly, personnels in fashion industry such as actors, models compete with others in terms of their personality and facial appearance, consequently, they are compelled to use certain beauty products in order to preserve their external appearance.
However, I believe that it is negatively affecting the individual life. On the one hand, youngsters are gradually distracting from their studies by adopting certain lifestyles , eventually they are taking less interest in education and other sectors. Furthermore, these products have some dangerous effect on the body, which are mostly overlooked by people. For instance- plastic surgeries are not always productive, sometimes its has negative outcomes. On the other hand, only affluent people are able to reap the benefit of such products because they are highly expensive in the market.
To conclude, although beauty enhancers modifiy the appearance of an individual but has certain side effects on body and also not everybody can afford using these products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66013071895 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90703167338 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9196663266 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161945785384 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576830335362 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481330773468 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947762968726 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524070746877 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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