Nowadays, people mostly use cars rather than bicycles as a transportation preference. What effects are caused by this trend? What can be done to encourage the public to use bicycles?
It is apparent that commuting from one place to another in less time has become the first priority of modern people in this present scenario; thus, they rather give much preference to cars than bicycles, and further, the effects and solutions of this vogue are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Using cars has certain negative effects that need to be considered, first and foremost is the ruination of the environment as excessive cars create harmful gases such as carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, and many more, thereby running on the roads. Meanwhile, it gives birth to global warming, whereby humans have to face dire consequences on their physical health. Moreover, the escalating rate of accidents may link with extreme usage of private vehicles especially cars, it is incontrovertible that cars mow down the pedestrians or kill other drivers in hit and run accidents, and therefore, it leads to the loss of precious life of human beings.
There are foremost steps that seem to be effective to encourage people to use bicycles. Firstly, high authority is live up to their responsibility in terms of ensuring the safety of bicycle riders on the roads. Apart from this, special parking areas should be built in order to park bicycles in a safe way. Secondly, awareness programs are a must to make people aware of the advantages of using bicycles how they can protect the environment as well as save their money.
In conclusion, both cars and bicycles have their own significance in the life of individuals; however, the usage of cars should be in the limit to avoid the ramifications so that these should be only used in emergency cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a safe way" with adverb for "safe"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ould be built in order to park bicycles in a safe way. Secondly, awareness programs are a mus...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...way. Secondly, awareness programs are a must to make people aware of the advantages of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97132616487 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77118190191 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.766015846 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.111111111 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7777777778 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276561288941 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10784039426 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702248681237 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157133237715 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606787008153 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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