Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
These days, an increasing number of families from many parts of the world decide to give birth to children later in life after having already settled down. This trend, which can be attributed to personal preference of the young generation and the growing need to provide children with proper nurture, is considered to have positive impacts on individuals and society.
One of the reasons why parents choose not to have babies until reaching their thirties or later is their desire to pursue personal ambitions. Some of these people prefer to develop their career by devoting a large amount of time working on projects, for example, so that they can achieve a high position in prestigious companies, while others would rather make the most of their freedom life before tying themselves to the resposibilities as full-time mothers or fathers. Having children means that these individuals have to sacrifice their future plans and dedicate most of their time taking care of the newborn.
Financial incapability is also the main cause for this tendency. A large number of spouses delay having babies because they want to give priority to stabilize their employment as well as residence. Only by doing so are young couples able to provide the offspring with sufficient nourishment and education, so that these children can grow up physically and mentally healthy.
As a consequence, both children and the society can benefit from this trend. To be specific, these children, who are brought up properly, can fully develop their talents and abilities without any sufferings resulted from famine and malnutrition since childhood. The young couples, also, without babies being a burden, can enthusiatically commit themselves to work and thus play a vital role in boosting the nation’s economy.
In conclusion, giving birth to children late in life may not as bad an idea as it may appear. But since having babies can have significant influences on both families and the community, couples should take it into account before making the final decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... also the main cause for this tendency. A large number of spouses delay having babies because the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22356495468 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74743807045 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5129224246 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187250637043 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695243273799 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413797703595 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105929056586 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370406384867 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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