Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
There seems to be a recent tendency that many young people do not want to have babies early in their life. They have several reasons for this choice, but it could pose to some impacts on both the society and their own family.
It is obvious that in these days, a large number of individuals are not ready to start a family when they are still young. Spending more time enjoying life is these people’s priority, which might be considerably affected if they get married and have children. My elder sister named Mai, for example, is 30 years old and has a stable job as a Chinese interpreter. Her time is spent on working and traveling on business trips. A baby can prevent her from pursuing successful career when the amount of time seems to be divided between her family and job. That’s why she decides not to have a baby at this time.
Also, unstable income and career as well are main causes for young couples to delay their making-a-family decision. Spouses need enough money to nurture their babies, which may become a hindrance to young parents in their early stage of career without stable income and a well-paid job. As a result, many people choose to acquire stability in career when they are able to ensure a better life before getting married and starting to raise a family.
However, this choice might bring some drawbacks to not only family life but also the society. The generation gap between parents and children will be clearly expanded if the children are born later. The parents are highly likely to have more difficulties in understanding, communicating with and educating their offspring. Additionally, babies born by too old humans could suffer from mental and physical problems which result in the low- quality workforce in the future.
In conclusion, the choice of having a baby late might be popularly preferred nowadays due to various benefits, but young couples should take it into careful consideration to avoid negative effects on their family and community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59820273255 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7193277889 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181049004231 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609722290064 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533338432549 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10814381888 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460609209541 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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