Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras.) In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the Global world, Technology has been increased rapidly. From the use of these technologies we can achieve whatever we want. In these days, People activities has been noticed with the help of unbelievable technologies via their phones and hidden security cameras. Sometimes it is possible that human are not aware from that what is happening. According to me, The merits of this phenomenon outweight the cons.
To begin with, Many people are using these technology in a wrong way and doing an unnecessary things. Some people thinks that it is against human rights and freedom. Society will take their privacy to put video cameras. Another disadvantages is that monitoring data can be misused from the authorized person and they can be used as a political purpose. Moreover, To track individual person's cellphone, they might be unaware from tis tracking system and it has a full chance to losing their personal information. So, it is risky for that person and they take legal action to stop this kind of tracking.
However, There is a plethora of pros to using these type of technology. Firstly, People are secure in their house or society to putting security cameras. The robbery and terrorist problem has been solved with the help of cameras. The existence of CCTV cameras and tracking system in public places, it would bring many advantages if they are used properly. Secondly, It will be definitely help of Police department and Crime branch in preventing and investing any crime activities. Also, To find out the thief it can be helpful in many departments.
Moving Further, With the help of satellite tracking technology, in can be help authorities to tracing crime persons. As they can be find out the exact location of mobile phones and reaches to the crime person. It has been proven that with the help of satellite tacking technology and cameras, It has reduced the number of crimes in many countries. similarly, We can get notification if someone is in danger in our near area. Furthermore, in city area government puts camera on roads for control the traffic system. In Addition to this, camera also help to monitoring tourist and historical places.
In conclusion, To put my all aforementioned points, I hold my view that there is a numerous brighter side of technologies than the darker side. I belive that this system as it makes our day-to-day life more secure and boosts efficiency in the security system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
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Suggestion: thing
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
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Suggestion: Similarly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97303921569 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74183870756 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9849028679 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.16 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.32 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273213444171 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687414271684 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480172242423 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142381221625 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618717443535 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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