A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institution or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?
Nowadays, getting a job or higher education requires both knowledge and hands on experience which makes it hard for fresh graduates as they uasually have zero chance to practice what they have learned. Participating in a short term unpaid job during the programme is required when pupils decide to enter many tertiary courses that has benefits and drawback at the same time.
There are tremedous advantages to students when they involve themselves in working environment. Firstly, academic theories are put into pratice and student would have a perfect chance to improve their soft skills. Academic knowledge is hard to understand unless we put it into action. It become practical information and student would definately remember it longer. Moreover, unpaid work teachs teenagers about kindness, understading of the society and how to overcome hardship in the future as they face many challenges during working period. It is also a good opotunity for them to have a clearer view of their future career since they get to know if dream jobs are suitable job or not and they would not regret in the future. At this point, they are able to work as they please, not because of financial needs, they would find out their interest in a specific type of job.
On the other hand, working as such early age has disadvantages as well. Most student are stressful with their study, taking a job as the same time may make them overloaded and hard to balance. Many organisations require them to work during weekends, therfore, time for recreation is replaced by work shift. Being stucked between work and study, students have no choice but to to their best. It may seem like a good idea but the result of both sudy and work may not be good at all. Furthermore, youngsters tend to lose their temper easily so this kind of exhausting work may encourage them to treat their workmate wrongly just to release the stress.
In conclution, undertaking a short term unpaid work during a course is vital for students. This kind oj job should be arrange in way that suitable and easy for them to follow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487394958 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.563369587 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557422969188 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8291851469 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254079639359 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798627902329 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503620701607 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147250826173 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192211945612 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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